RSS Feed Random Comic Add To Favorites StrYders is proudly hosted by Smack Jeeves Webcomic Hosting.

47

April 1st, 2010, 7:56 am

Average Rating: 5.00
<< First < Previous Next > Most Recent >>

Author's Comments:

Reply Red Rabbit, April 1st, 2010, 8:01 am

No one is coming to save you And that's it for chapter one...will now begin on the color cover for chapter 2 which I intend to post here in stages so people can give me pointers. I might have it done by tomorrow evening but monday probably sounds more realistic since I really take the cover seriously. If people really want the next story update I will start posting chapter 2 with a 'placeholder' for the cover.

Reply Advertisement, December 15th, 2017, 6:18 am

User's Comments:

Reply zoid, April 1st, 2010, 8:28 am

Take your time :)

Reply Steneub, April 1st, 2010, 9:10 am

I miss Barbara :(

Reply tsukiyomi, April 1st, 2010, 12:41 pm

Thus marks the end of chapter one.
Was a good paced first chapter! Can't wait to see how it turns out. Incredible detail on the 1st panel btw.

Reply modus_operendi, April 1st, 2010, 7:00 pm

MAN! this page is incredible!
so much detail ; A ; <333

Reply Sonus (Guest), April 2nd, 2010, 4:44 pm

Syllabic Spelling Correction No one really says "etern-it-y."

But rather, "eter-ni-ty" is more correct when you actually hear people pronounce the word. Just throwing that out there.

Also, music notes around the lyric bubbles might be helpful too, to imply that he is making up lyrics for a song. Otherwise, people will first read it through as a "Hmm, more straightforward dialogue.. Read normally.. err... too late."

Reply mawk (Guest), April 2nd, 2010, 7:30 pm

A lot of comics do that, though. He'd have a problem if no one could tell that he was making up song lyrics even after they'd read the whole thing, but as it stands, there's no problem with it coming together at the end. Besides, the ambiguity sort of fits.

Musical notes would just look terribly out of place, anyway.

Reply Camroc, May 4th, 2010, 11:53 am

Is this like the Domino sugar factory that closed down in NYc Red?

Post A Comment